1007477050 发表于 2009-4-16 19:12:30

My English tencher

she is funny and quiet. she is short.she like winter best ,because he can make a snow man.she is tall.she class is very funny.I like her.

306652436 发表于 2009-4-18 09:38:56

she is short.she is tall.矛盾了吧！
she class ———Her class

danxiangzhang 发表于 2009-4-19 19:40:50

前面是she 后面怎么是he 了，矛盾啊!

Elaine83 发表于 2009-4-29 15:24:15

“tencher”错了哇~~~

wuyuqing318 发表于 2009-5-14 15:43:38

应该是She likes   ，make snowmen

听海 发表于 2009-5-22 18:48:06

需要加强写作能力。。。。。。。。。

赵莉花1120 发表于 2009-5-25 16:40:57

还要多加油哦，不过还不错

XU990516 发表于 2009-8-19 09:26:28

需要加强写作能力。。。。。。。。。不过比我强，一个起加油

jyq31 发表于 2009-8-31 09:59:54

she is funny and quiet. she is short.she like winter best ,because he can make a snow man.she is tall.she class is very funny.I like her.错误不少.大写问题,第三句like 后面加s. because 这个句子的主语用错.应用she,倒数第二句应改为"Her calss is very funny"

wyh717 发表于 2009-9-3 21:48:50

继续加油吧，有待加强
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