yunshangchen 发表于 2005-12-12 13:01:08

学生习作

My Family
Hello, I’m Xu Yiwen. I’m twelve. I’m from Suzhou. My parents and I live in Dongshan. I like going shopping. At the weekends, I do housework with my mother. Sometimes, I listen to music, sometimes, I read English, I like English very much.
My mother is Chinese, she can only speak Chinese. She likes teaching. She teaches maths in a primary school. I learn Maths from her. On Sundays, she does all the cleaning and cooking. I can help her.
My father is a farmer. He is a bit fat and his face is a bit black. He likes playing cards. Sometimes, he plays chess with me. He plays well. I like him very much.
This is my family, I love my family! What about you?

画王 发表于 2005-12-19 10:21:28

good!

一生一世 发表于 2005-12-28 16:31:08

同意楼上的

lhf_yz 发表于 2006-1-6 23:11:45

Couldn't be better!

坠落的翅膀 发表于 2006-1-29 12:16:47

very good!

very good!

水晶娃娃 发表于 2006-3-3 18:23:27

很好.

橙子三号 发表于 2006-3-9 22:24:40

verygood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

知娴 发表于 2006-3-10 15:28:18

还可以

heag 发表于 2006-5-26 23:13:55

good

风雨飘零 发表于 2010-10-24 21:00:45

做的很用心,值得我好好学习,琢磨
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