多多指教！复述：我的口语训练和练笔尝试。
:handshake从5A第六单元开始，我试着让学生把A部分用自己的话说出来，并准备了一本小作文本让他们写下来。放假前我在学校里整理了一些写得还可以的出来。今天回校，把它拷了下来（可怜硬件之差，学校不能上网）。现在发上来请大家看看，请多多指教哦。[ 本帖最后由 iceyhtac 于 2006-2-11 20:22 编辑 ] Unit 8 A camping trip
1. Molly
It is Sunday. The children and their teachers are at a camping site.
They’re showing their things to each other. They are very happy!
David has a chair, and his sister Nancy has a chair, too. She’s sitting near her tent. Liu Tao has a big tent. Helen has a tin of chicken and a tin of fish. And Yang Ling has a tin-opener. Mike has a pot and a stove. The twins have two blankets and a telescope. They can see Miss Li has abox of chocolates and Mr. Green has some fruit from the telescope.
They’re very happy to take this camping trip!
2. Harry
It is a sunny day. The students go on a camping trip by bus.
At the camping site, they are happy to show their things to each other. Liu Tao has a tent. It’s big and bright. David has a nice chair. David’s sister has a chair, too. She’s sitting near her tent. Helen has a tin of chicken and a tin of fish. They are nice! Yang Ling has a tin-opener. She helps Helen open the tins. Mike has a pot and a stove. In the afternoon, he helps his friends cook lunch. Su Hai and Su Yang have two blankets and a telescope. Miss Li has a box of chocolates. Mr Green has some fruit. In the evening, the children and their teachers together dance and sing around fire.
They have a very good time.
3. Laura
It is a fine day. The children and their teachers take a camping trip.
They are near a hill. They are happy to show their things.
Liu Tao has a big tent. David shows his nice chair to Liu Tao. Nancy has a chair, too. She sits near her tent. Helen has a tin of chicken and a tin of fish. Yang Ling has an opener. Mike has a pot and a stove. The twins have two blankets and telescope. They are using the telescope. They find Miss Li and Mr. Green. They are far away from them. Miss Li has a box of chocolates and Mr. Green has some fruit.
The children are very. They will eat the food, sing and dance in the evening.
[ 本帖最后由 iceyhtac 于 2006-2-11 20:25 编辑 ] 4. Peter
It is a nice day. The birds are flying and singing. The flowers and
the trees are nice. The children and their teachers go camping. Near the hill, they are at a camping site. On the grass, they happy to show their things to each other.
Liu Tao has a big and pretty tent. David has a tent, too. And he has a nice chair. Liu sees David’s chair is pretty. Nancy has a chair, too. Helen has a tin of chicken and a tin of fish. Yang Ling has a tin-opener. Mike has a pot and a stove is near his tent. The twins have two blankets and a telescope. They use the telescope to find Miss Li and Mr. Green are coming. Miss Li has a box of chocolates. Mr. Green has some fruit. They look very happy. The girls dance and sing. They boys play football and eat their food.
They have a good time.
5. June
The children and their teachers are now near the hill. They are at a
camping site. They are showing their things to each other.
There are ten people at the camping site. They are David, Liu Tao, Nancy, Helen, Yang Ling, Mike, Su Hai, Su Yang, Miss Li and Mr Green. David has a chair. Liu Tao has a big tent. Nancy has a chair, too. Helen has a tin of food. Yang Ling has a tin-opener. Mike has a pot and a stove. The twins have two blankets and a telescope. Look, Miss Li and Mr Green are coming. What do they have? Miss Li has a box of chocolates and Mr Green has some fruit. Oh! Nancy is sitting on the chair near her tent. Su Hai and Su Yang are looking for something.
They are all happy and busy.
6. Ivan
It is a fine day. The children and their teachers go camping. They are
near the hill. They are happy to show each other their things. David, Liu Tao, Nancy, Helen, Yang Ling, Mike, Su Hai, Su Yang are all there. They have two chairs, a tin of chicken, a tin of fish, a tin-opener, a pot, a stove, a telescope and two blankets. Miss Li and Mr Green have a box of chocolates and some fruit. They eat their things in the afternoon. They dance and sing in the evening. They are very happy.
[ 本帖最后由 iceyhtac 于 2006-2-11 20:26 编辑 ] 不错啊，辛苦了！ 7. Maria
It is a nice day. The students and their teachers are very happy,
because they go on a camping trip. The camping site is near the hill. They are very happy showing their things to each other.
David has a chair. David’s sister Nancy has a nice chair, too. Now Nancy is sitting near her tent. Liu Tao has a big tent. Helen has a tin of chicken, a tin of fish. Yang Ling has a tin-opener. Mike has a stove and a pot. Su Hai and Su Yang have two blankets and a telescope. Su Yang is using the telescope. She finds Miss Li and Mr Green. Oh, Miss Li has a box of chocolates. Mr Green has some fruit. In the evening, the children and their teachers will eat their food and sleep in the tents.
It is a good day! They have good time.
8. Aileen
The children and their teachers are now near the hill. They are at a
camping site.
Look! Now they are showing their things to each other. David has an orange chair and Liu Tao has a big tent. Nancy is near her tent. She has a chair, too. The girl with yellow hair is Helen. She has a tin of chicken and a tin of fish. But she can’t open them. The girl with two small eyes is Yang Ling. She has a tin-opener. She can help Helen open the tins. Mike has a pot and a stove. He’s cooking now. Su Hai and Su Yang have two blankets and a telescope. Miss Li and Mr Green are coming. They have some good things. Miss li has box of chocolate and Mr Green are coming. They have some good things. Miss Li has a box of chocolate and Mr Green has some fruit. They are very happy.
They like the camping trip very much.
Unit 9 Shapes
9. Laura
The bell rings. Miss Li and her students are in the classroom. She is
teaching them how to draw shapes.
Miss Li draws a picture first. In the picture, there is a boy with a rectangle bag flying a kite. The square kite is high in the beautiful sky. They boy looks happy. Then Miss Li draws another kite. The long kite is flying in the sky, too. It has five circles. Liu Tao can draw a circle. He comes to the blackboard and shows them how to draw a sun. The sun is a circle.
At last, all the students know how to draw shapes. They can draw some nice pictures. They are very happy. 10. Helen
This is an Art lesson. Miss Li teaches her students about shapes. The
students learn how to draw them.
Miss Li draws a picture. On the blackboard, a boy with a bag is
flying a kite. The kite is a square and the bag is a rectangle.
And then Miss Li draws another picture. It’s a kite, too. It has five circles. Liu Tao can draw a circle. He comes to the blackboard and shows them how to draw the sun.
In this class, the students are very happy. Now, they know how to draw a lot of shapes.
11. Judy
This is an Art lesson. Miss Li is the Art teacher. She’s teaching her
students about shapes. The students are learning how to draw shapes.
Miss Li draws a picture first. She draws a kite, a boy and a bag. The boy has the rectangle bag. He is flying a kite. The kite is a square.
Then Miss Li draws another picture. It’s a kite with five circles. Liu Tao can draw a circle. He comes to the blackboard and shows his classmates how to draw the sun.
Now the students know how to draw shapes. So they are all happy.
12. Maria
It is an Art lesson. The Art teacher Miss Li is teaching her students
about shapes. The children are learning from her how to draw some shapes.
Class begins. Miss Li draws a picture on the blackboard. There’s a boy flying a square kite. The boy has a rectangle bag. And then Miss Li draws another picture on the blackboard. It is a kite, too. The kite has five circles. Liu Tao comes to the blackboard and shows them how to draw a circle. He draws a sun.
It is a good class, because the students now know how to draw shapes. After class, the students are happy showing their pictures to each other. 13. Aileen
This is an Art lesson, Miss Li is teaching her students about shapes.
The students are happy learning how to draw them.
Miss Li draws a picture first. Look! There is a boy flying a square kite on the blackboard. The kite is flying in the sky. It is like a diamond. The boy has a lovely bag. It’s a rectangle. Now the students learn two shapes. Then Miss Li draws a kite with five circles. Liu Tao comes to blackboard and shows them how to draw a circle. He draws a sun. The sun is a circle.
The students learn many shapes. Now they are showing their pictures to each other.
14. Tina
Miss Li is at an Art lesson. She is teaching her students about shapes.
The students like learning how to draw shapes very much.
Miss Li asks the students to look at the blackboard. There is a boy flying a kite. The kite is very nice. It is a square. And the boy has a bag, too. The bag is not a square. It’s a rectangle. Miss Li then draws five circles. It’s a kite, too. Liu Tao can draw a circle. He goes to the blackboard and shows the students how to draw a circle. The circle is a sun.
The students like this Art lesson very much.
15. Sally
Miss Li is at an Art lesson. She teaches her students about shapes.
The students learn how to draw shapes. Miss Li draws a picture on the blackboard first. A boy is flying a square kite on it. The boy has a lovely bag. It’s a rectangle. And then Miss Li draws a kite with five circles. Liu Tao comes to blackboard and shows other students how to draw a sun. The sun is a circle. The students show their shapes to each other after class. 只打出来很小的一部分，因为敲键盘挺枯燥的。呵呵。
Laura是我的课代表，还有maria,Aileen，写得都还可以的哦。
另外还有罗嗦的Peter, Harry，简洁的Ivan。
多多指教哦。 不错，只要一个老师有锲而不舍的追求,坚持多层次的教学反思,她肯定会有收获，在不久的将来肯定会达到一定的高度:) 谢谢鼓励咯。