wychy 发表于 2010-11-12 12:29:02

大丰市万盈镇中心小学六（二）之家【优秀习作】

Myfatherisverycool
                                  大丰市万盈镇中心小学六（2）班 李晓璇

    Twentyyearsago,myfatherwasabigboy. Hewas twenty-four years old. Hewasthin.Hiseyeswerebig.
      Now, He is a Middle-aged man. He is forty-four years old. He is a little fat. His eyes are small. He is a hairdresser. He is very cool and fashion. Hecanmake the other’s hair style more beautiful.
      I love my father!

鲍子非包子 发表于 2011-5-22 16:38:08

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