我班一些同学写的很不错， 过两天我来上传一些。让大家指导一下。不知道小升初要不要写。

我们小升初要考作文呢,
正好用的到!

怎么我看不到啊？？？？？？？？？

谢谢分享！
辛苦啦！

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UID53920 帖子168 精华0 积分483 金钱302  威望11  贡献0  阅读权限60 在线时间12 小时 注册时间2008-8-15 最后登录2008-10-21  3#  发表于 2008-8-20 22:02 | 只看该作者 thanks a lot

i不错 1# s8206031

感谢共享，多谢，辛苦！

感谢共享，多谢，辛苦！

看了第一篇作文，吓死～

Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the farm. On the farms, we can Jiniu Nai, but also to collect eggs. There are many fruit trees in the farm. I pick some apples, ben pick grapes and a lot of their taste. We like to eat fruit, we played very happy.

Today is Monday, the weather was warm and sunny, I get up very early to come to school. There are many students in the playground on the campaign, ben is running, gaoshan is playing, he is an outstanding football player, I like jogging. We Play very happy.

很多语法错误啊