My family
    My name is Theresa. I live in Naihai with my parents and my brother. We all like the music. So my dad often buys a CD about music once a week. My mother usually listens to music when she is working. My brother likes playing the guitar. I often sing the song with my friends.
    My dad is a boss. He is very busy. So I think he likes working. My mom is good at cooking. She often cooks delicious food for us. My brother and I are students. We study in the same school, but in the different grade. We often go to school by father’s car. On the weekend, I often ride my bike to Qiandeng Lake with my lovely brother.
    This is my happy family. We love each other very much.

你写的真好，真为你感到自豪

应该是in different grades

应该是my mum和in different grades

Your hand writting is so great!

NAIHAI是什么地方，是南海吗还是南京？？？？？？？？？？？

不错不错，写得很好。

小学生写得不错！加油。

非常期待下一篇

写的真好，真为你感到自豪