she is funny and quiet. she is short.she like winter best ,because he can make a snow man.she is tall.she class is very funny.I like her.

she is short.she is tall.矛盾了吧！
she class ———Her class

前面是she 后面怎么是he 了，矛盾啊!

“tencher”错了哇~~~

应该是She likes   ，make snowmen

需要加强写作能力。。。。。。。。。

还要多加油哦，不过还不错

需要加强写作能力。。。。。。。。。不过比我强，一个起加油

she is funny and quiet. she is short.she like winter best ,because he can make a snow man.she is tall.she class is very funny.I like her.错误不少.大写问题,第三句like 后面加s. because 这个句子的主语用错.应用she,倒数第二句应改为"Her calss is very funny"

继续加油吧，有待加强