My mother is a major.She is thirty eight. she likes green.she has short hair,big eyes and small mouth.she likes see the film,too.l love she very much.she loves me , too.

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难道我写的不好吗?

恩 挺好的啊   有一处   she likes 后面可接to +动原 或  like doing sth

决定COPY 下来,给我家的做阅读理解用正好.

看电影不是 watch the film ?

还有一处，I love her very much. 动词后面跟宾格。后面一句你会的啊，She loves me, too.
总体感觉很不错，赞一个！

小错误帮你指出来，便于你今后改进。thirty-eight 几十和几的中间有短横。a small mouth

除了楼上各位指出的小错外,楼主还应注意首母要大写哦.另外 She likes green.最好放在She likes see the film,too.前面.

thank you,我记住了